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Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

Link to topic https://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php...#pid146603
Quest or Personal Storyline? Quest 
Participating characters (please list): Feran Ap Maddyn 
Total character count including spaces: 47,328 
Total word count: 8670


Finally got the quest done! Hope all the numbers are right, I put the thread into Miscrosoft word to get character count etc.
"Feran, what if you come across an enemy you cannot harm?"

"Hit them harder" 

"OK, but your sword can't hurt them" 

"Get a better sword? Or a really big stick"
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Link to topic https://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php...#pid146906
Quest or Personal Storyline? Quest 
Participating characters (please list): Feran Ap Maddyn 
Total character count including spaces: 62,883
Total word count: 11,062

Darkshire quest turn in lads!
"Feran, what if you come across an enemy you cannot harm?"

"Hit them harder" 

"OK, but your sword can't hurt them" 

"Get a better sword? Or a really big stick"
Reply

Link to topic https://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php...#pid146965
Quest or Personal Storyline? Quest
Participating characters (please list): Jak, Para (OC), Daxter, Ashelin, Sig, Damas (NPCs)
Total character count including spaces: 53262
Total word count: 10013
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[Image: Darkdata.png]Jak/Mar- Dynamite Kid/ DA 2018" (Translated text)[Image: hVDTXBF.gif](Thanks Ezzy!)

The Infamous Dynamite Kid- Sasuke

DA 15
DA 16'
DA 17'
DA 18' 
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(12-16-2019, 09:31 PM)Feran Wrote: Link to topic https://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php...#pid146603
Quest or Personal Storyline? Quest 
Participating characters (please list): Feran Ap Maddyn 
Total character count including spaces: 47,328 
Total word count: 8670


Finally got the quest done! Hope all the numbers are right, I put the thread into Miscrosoft word to get character count etc.

Finally getting around to the grading...

This is awarded GREAT and has earned a 50% bonus of 473.28 OM.

The biggest word of advice I can offer to better improve your writing is to slow down a bit. A lot of the errors I saw throughout this storyline could've rather easily been fixed with a second go over the following day. It's great that you can bang out posts like this, and its a very handy skill to have, but equally important is the ability to slow down from time to time and analyze your own work. 

This being said, I hope you keep up the great work. You can be a force to be reckoned with rather easily on this site.


Edit by Dust: 9734.20 + 473.28 = 10207.48
In battle it is important to keep a sharp blade

But it is by far more important to keep a sharp mind.
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